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Trying to script, C&C please

This is my first attempt at an SD script, so bear with me. I need to know what Im doing right and wrong, and what the other commands ( like $dream_room, $tutorial_script etc) there are. This probably will never be in game, but might as well test my scripting on something I can readily make up.

uses $tutorial_script

create $dream_room "%club1" "Pandemonium Main Room" "The club is very dark, with the only light coming from laser lights which swing to and fro over the heads of the patrons on the the dance floor.The floor itself gives off a muted glow, each of the multiple panels slowly pulsing through neon blues, greens and reds, lighting up the feet of the dancers.The walls seem to be made of huge dark gray stone bricks,and have some moss growing on them. A few alcoves are all thats left of the old tombs, and the bodies have been cleared out, and in their place are long, irridescent black lights. On the ceiling far above, dark steel beams seem to hold up the ceiling, and the laser lights are bolted to the different beams haphazardly."

create $npc "%Watcher"

rename %Watcher "Watcher"

describe %watcher as "A tall slender man with beady, squinted eyes, of obvious asian descent.On his head is a small, matte black bowler hat with a crimson red band. A Jack of Hearts playing card is stuck into the brim of the hat.His body is wrapped in a long, matte black, synth-leather duster coat, which hides his full form under the thick layers. On the high collar of the coat is a small silver chinese Luck symbol. Large combat boots are on his feet, shined steel plating covering the toe and most of the foot, and laced tightly up the front."

display "Your vision adjusts as you step down into the club,and you're temporarily blinded by the sudden darkness"

C&C, if youd please